Voice quality was good and probably I have similar accent it was easy for me to understand. Just one point for brainstorming: I felt it was mostly numbers and less encouragement to employees. Probably it is difficult to fit all in couple of minute speech. But your picture on the screen helps to keep employees engaged during the message. Please let me know if I have missed anything.
Nice audio presentation Abdullah. You highlighted the key information effectively and closed the message in a way that would surely leave your employees satisfied. Good job.
Thanks everyone for your comments. Yes, Carl. English is not my first language and this wasn't one of my favorite assignments. In my job I would be doing all my communication and presentation in my first language, doing it in English is a bit challenging.
Abdullah, Good job! I think you included a lot of pertinent information in a short period of time and it was easy to understand. I also think your announcement of an employee bonus helps engage your audience even further and will leave your employees satisfied.
Quality information and easy to understand. I am assuming English is your second language based on your bio but you handle it well, nice job!
ReplyDeleteVoice quality was good and probably I have similar accent it was easy for me to understand. Just one point for brainstorming: I felt it was mostly numbers and less encouragement to employees. Probably it is difficult to fit all in couple of minute speech. But your picture on the screen helps to keep employees engaged during the message. Please let me know if I have missed anything.
ReplyDeleteNice audio presentation Abdullah. You highlighted the key information effectively and closed the message in a way that would surely leave your employees satisfied. Good job.
ReplyDeleteThanks everyone for your comments.
ReplyDeleteYes, Carl. English is not my first language and this wasn't one of my favorite assignments. In my job I would be doing all my communication and presentation in my first language, doing it in English is a bit challenging.
Abdullah,
ReplyDeleteGood job! I think you included a lot of pertinent information in a short period of time and it was easy to understand. I also think your announcement of an employee bonus helps engage your audience even further and will leave your employees satisfied.
Abdullah, you did a great job with English! Effective bi-lingual communication will serve you well in your career. Thanks!
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